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I
love short poems. I
like to read them,
savor them,write them;
and would like to see
editors publish more of
them. There isn’t
any room for a weak
line, word, rhyme or
even syllable when
you’ve so little
space to work with.
Writing and exploring
the short poem is an
especially productive
way to nurture what
Gerard Manley Hopkins
called “the habit
of perfection”
that serves poets well
when they attempt
longer works.
1.
Lines on the Antiquity of Microbes
Adam
Had ’em.
I begin with a tiny,
anonymous poem often
attributed to the late
19th/ early 20th
century light
versifier, Gillian
Strickland.
This 2 ½ word, 4
syllable treat was long
hailed as the shortest
poem in English. Its
title, however, is way
longer than the poem
itself. Editors would
later try to make the
poem shorter and
funnier by changing its
title (and subject) to
Fleas
; but in doing so, dehydrated both its wit and meaning.
Our author expects us
to remember that his
title begins with the
same word as two of the
most famous poems of
the Romantic
period—
Wordsworth’s
159-line, 1210 word
“Lines
Written a Few Miles above Tintern Abbey
”
and Thomas Gray’s128 line, 870 word “
Lines
Written in a
Country
Churchyard.”
Coleridge, Shelley, and
Byron also had titles
that began with Lines
written or on.
It's a cherry on
top of the humor if we
are aware of how long
such serious meditative
poem can be, but we
don’t need to
know that for the
contrast between
Strickland’s
title and the poetry it
introduces to be
hilarious.
Our expectations are
delightfully dashed as
we transition from
verbiage with Latinate
diction suitable for a
scientific article in a
learned journal to the
poem’s jaunty,
colloquial,
brevity-is-the-soul-of-wit
style. No ten syllable
iambic pentameter here!
The poet’s 3½
word couplet simply has
two feet on the ground,
each of them a single
trochee: Adam
/ Had’em
(“them”
being ruled too wordy,
so reduced 50% via
contraction).
Is this poem merely a
joke? It uses the
joke’s typical
long set-up and short
punchline structure,
and we do chuckle at
the rapidly delivered
punchline.
But if this tiny
masterpiece has outer
humor it also has what
Robert Frost called
inner seriousness. Our
poet’s weighty
title and tiny couplet
remind us that
humankind has been
struggling with
miniscule viruses and
bacteria since the
beginning of time. The
symbiotic relationship
it points to is
fundamental, and the
stretch of time it
presents is enormous.
Bacteria can keep us
going by assisting with
digestion, but we need
not be reminded today
that viruses can be
deadly.
2.
Western wind, when will thou blow,
The small rain down can rain?
Christ, if my love were in my arms
And I in my bed again!
Most editors entitle
this poem
“Western
Wind.” In
England, western winds
blow in from the
Atlantic ocean and
usually bring gentle
rain and
mild weather,
as opposed to the cold, harsher easterly winds from the continent. To the anonymous late medieval poet who wrote the poem such weather would have symbolized the return of springtime’s warmth, renewal, fertility, and love.
Western winds are
also associated with
the sea. The speaker is
probably on a ship in
the middle of a
violent,
life-threatening gale
that has been going on
for some time. His
almost prayerful
opening lines make us
feel his keen longing
for a change of
weather. He is pleading
with the western wind
to return with its
benign waves and gentle
rain, so his ship can
sail safely back to
port.
His second two lines
explode with a powerful
oath that captures his
fear that he may not
survive and his longing
to be safe at home in
the warmth of
his bed, with his beloved in his arms.
I’ve imagined the speaker as a sailor. This poem, however, speaks just as well
to soldiers under fire in a trench in WWI or to anyone longing to be anywhere
but whatever perilous situation they find themselves in. The vehemence of the
appeal to his savior delivers anguish so heart-rending that it feels too large for
two lines to bear. The poem almost spills out of itself.
Some of you may know James Wright’s poem, “Lying in a Hammock at
William Duffy’s Farm” which concludes with his realization: “I have wasted
my life.” Long before Wright, A.E. Housman made us feel the horror of
someone lamenting a wasted life with just 4 lines. Composer Lukas Foss has
set this piece to music sung by Adele Addison that makes Housman’s poem
spine chilling.
The lonely reverberation in the hollow night is the perfect setup for the
speaker’s bitter realization that reverberates with the bells, outdoing them in
intensity. Why does their sound affect the speaker so? Perhaps he’s read the
last three lines of a John Donne poem: “Therefore send not to know / For
whom the bell tolls / It tolls for thee”—for his wasted life. Notice that he feels
this way every time he hears the bells when walking out at night.
“It is futile,” I said.
Stephen Crane is best known as a novelist, but he also published two volumes
of mostly short, epigrammatic poems in free verse, and this 8-liner is one of
my favorites. If I were to entitle it I’d call it “Folly.” In his vision of a man
trying to overtake the horizon, Crane has found the perfect metaphorical
action for an obsessed, delusional mind. The very earth the man runs along
keeps spinning around on its axis, forever keeping the horizon he longs for out
of reach.
There are older poems that feel “dated” when we read them today, but not
Crane’s. Published 129 years ago, his poem speaks to our own time, as every
day we hear and witness too many men and women passionately pursuing the
horizon. When it’s pointed out that they are victims of misinformation, they
answer: “I’ve made up my mind. “Don’t confuse me with the facts!”
5.
The Secret Sits
We dance around in a ring and suppose,
But the secret sits in the middle and knows.
Robert Frost’s metaphysical rhymed couplet is his shortest poem, and one of
his most famous and frequently discussed works. We are all confronted by the
mystery of our existence that prophets, philosophers, artists, and physicists
have been trying to solve unsuccessfully for centuries. The speaker in most
Frost poems is an “I,” but the subject here is “We,” meaning You and I, poet
and reader, and every human being on earth.
Frost loves to supercharge the simplest words with complex meaning.
Sits
is
brilliantly chosen for both title and poem to personify Frost’s
Secret
. Kings
and Queens,Czars and Emperors
Sit
in state on thrones from which they issue
edicts to control their subjects. Too often, they are as imperious as they are
inscrutable.
Notice that by forcing us to “dance around in a ring” Frost’s enigmatic
Monarch personifies us as submissive circus beasts pointlessly led around in a
circle that never ends by an animal tamer.
Emotionally, our speaker is both frustrated and amused by our inalterable,
frustrating befuddlement in the presence of
The Secret.
6.
To make a prairie it takes a clover and one bee,
One clover, and a bee.
And revery.
The revery alone will do,
If bees are few.
Emily Dickinson is remarkably fond of the short poem; more than half of her
1775 poems are 8 lines or less. I suspect that her user-friendly preference for
brevity did much to inculcate the “habit of perfection” that has led to her
enduring popularity.
A Prairie is a huge expanse of grassland that can be miles long. All it takes to
make one, the poet claims, is a clover and a bee. But she realizes that the
prairie they make does not really exist without human consciousness to
perceive it and name it, so she adds one more word: revery.
Dickinson is anticipating C.G. Jung, who argues that “Without consciousness
there would, practically speaking, be no world, for the world exists for us as it
is consciously reflected by a psyche.” Clover and bees are tiny. But the mind of
someone dreaming or imagining is boundless. Notice that revery is the only
three syllable word in the poem, and perfect for expressing the limitless flow
and grandeur of the imagination. Clover. Bee. Revery. We might scratch our
heads, reminding ourselves that this poem is merely five lines long.
7.
Period Piece
.
Through much of the 20th century poets tried to create a poem that would be even shorter than “Adam / Had ’em.” None of the attempts struck me as
successful until I came across the light verse poet Conti’s “Period Piece.” Conti
ends the quest forever, not with a word or syllable but with the punctuation
mark we use to bring the curtain down on sentences and on lines of poetry.
His tiny spot of ink—his poem—cannot be spoken! It explicitly refers back to a
missing sentence. Metaphorically it refers to the end of all the thoughts and
emotions that humans have expressed since we began walking the earth.
The poem’s title refers to any work of art—painting, poem, play, novel—that
captures a particular historical “period” in detail. Wrap all period pieces
together and the “Many” becomes the “One,” snowballing into all human
history, into the past itself. With two words and a dot Conti is meditating on
finality. We are, as Kay Ryan points out, floating along “The Niagara River”
towards our individual periods, aware that there are also periods lying in wait
for the human race and our star. (I hear Hamlet, just before his period ends,
uttering, “The rest is silence.”)
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Robert Frost said his aim was to “lodge a few poems where they would be hard
to get rid of.” Great short poems need only be read once or twice to enter the
brain and become part of our biology. All poems aspire to do that, but
memorability is partial to brevity; the shorter the poem, the more likely it is to
leap off the page into your memory.
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